Your story is deeply emotional, with moments of both heartache and hope. The unexpected twists, especially with the revelation about Michael’s innocence and the bond between him and Harry, are powerful. It brings out themes of trust, forgiveness, and the complexity of relationships.
If you’re looking for advice, reflection, or suggestions on how to further develop the narrative, I’m here to help. Whether it’s refining the flow or expanding on specific moments, feel free to let me know!